This is my poem (the scooter) We had to make a poem. That was something that was a part of me. I chose my scooter
The scooter by me (Bree)
I have always been a Lucky child
When I was nine
my parents gave me a blue scooter.
I couldn't believe that
It was mine `
bright blue it was
yes it was.
It was an M.G.P.
I rode it to school
almost every day to school and back.
It would ride smoothly
It would be my pride and joy.
I have always taken care of it.
I try not to get it dented
or scratched
I love my scooter
and sometime it loves me
Every so often I fall off
but I don’t blame the scooter
it is not his fault.
I can never wait until
I can ride it to
school tomorrow.
What an awesome post Bree. I felt the same way when I got my scooter
ReplyDeleteThank's Elijah
ReplyDeleteCool Bree I liked this post because some of the words are so awesome.
ReplyDeleteAwesome Bree, that is such a cool poem, it has a lot of describing words which actually stand out!!!
ReplyDeleteWell done:)
Wow you must really like your scooter and I think it likes you to:)
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