Friday, 9 August 2013

The waterbeests and the crocodile

Here is my writing it about two waterbeests that are arguing one think it is a log and the other crocodile.

Ferb slowly walks out of the foggy air to see a creek.
“How are we going to get a across” said Ferb
“I don’t know” said Fred
“Look over there” said Ferb It is a crocodile” said
“NO it is not it is a log” said Ferb
As they were doing this the herd of wildebeests were mooing away with not a slightest bit of interest in them.
“NO NO NO it is a crocodile watch this and Fred threw a stone at the crocodile back it move just a little bit and then stay still again Fred was getting impatient. He poke a stick at the crocodile the crocodile didn't budge. Ferb said “I told you it was a log” Fred face got red and steam came out of his ears Fred push water onto the crocodile Ferb said                                                               “it is a log all your doing is waste your too”.
“Watch this”
said Fred and he jump onto the crocodiles back and he jump and jumped then SNAP!!!.....
    “Oh no” said Ferb

“What is that” asked Freddy isn't it a log
You are kidding me said Ferb.   


  1. Wow Bree,
    That was such a great piece of writing.
    I like how you put a video in too.
    The names you choose for the Wildebeests were awesome!
    Keep up the good work:)
    Well done.

  2. Awesome work Breezee.
    Great writing.
    Your writing is very interesting.
    Well done.
    Keep up the great work.

  3. Good job Bree!
    Awesome writing I like the words that you chose
    Keep it up!

  4. Awesome Bree
    I like how you gave them name
    Keep up the good work
    Well done


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