Wednesday 31 July 2013

My 5 sentence starter



Today for writing we got given 5 sentence starter we had to make up a little story stating with these words.
Quick
Stand
Out
Suddenly
and either Ow/Embarrassed/Um
I hope you enjoy :)

“ Quick get to the line”.
“Stand at the start, ready, set, go.
Out I go onto the track speeding as fast as I can, I am coming first.
Suddenly I trip on my shoelace.  
"Ow" someone stood on my leg.

4 comments:

  1. Wow Bree,
    That was such a great blog post!
    I like the way you recorded it too.
    I like the sentences that you choose:)
    Well done!!!

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  2. Awesome Bree,
    Nice clear voice.
    Well done.
    Keep it up.

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  3. "wow Bree! I love how you have
    such a nice clear voice when you recorded.
    Keep up the nice work :-)

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  4. Wow Bree!
    I like how you put so much emotion in your writing
    Keep it up !

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