Today for writing we got given 5 sentence starter we had to make up a little story stating with these words.
Quick
Stand
Out
Suddenly
and either Ow/Embarrassed/Um
I hope you enjoy :)
“ Quick get to the line”.
“Stand at the start, ready, set, go.
Out I go onto the track speeding as fast as I can, I am coming first.
Suddenly I trip on my shoelace.
"Ow" someone stood on my leg.
Wow Bree,
ReplyDeleteThat was such a great blog post!
I like the way you recorded it too.
I like the sentences that you choose:)
Well done!!!
Awesome Bree,
ReplyDeleteNice clear voice.
Well done.
Keep it up.
"wow Bree! I love how you have
ReplyDeletesuch a nice clear voice when you recorded.
Keep up the nice work :-)
Wow Bree!
ReplyDeleteI like how you put so much emotion in your writing
Keep it up !