tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post4176548933459916450..comments2023-04-07T02:59:11.305+12:00Comments on Bree: Caving at camp Bree Ghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05846483864777263154noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-57663516959483315452013-06-28T09:55:39.827+12:002013-06-28T09:55:39.827+12:00Awesome Bree I really really liked it all
Keep i...Awesome Bree I really really liked it all<br /> Keep it upAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-78634178981914971502013-06-28T09:53:41.903+12:002013-06-28T09:53:41.903+12:00Awesome Bree your audio is really clear
I like yo...Awesome Bree your audio is really clear <br />I like your photos <br />Well Done Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-90051151122228562322013-06-27T09:35:09.754+12:002013-06-27T09:35:09.754+12:00Wow Bree I like the photos you put on
Keep it up!...Wow Bree I like the photos you put on <br />Keep it up!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-77043390406818180142013-06-27T09:25:35.561+12:002013-06-27T09:25:35.561+12:00Your writing is great it is fantastic good work Br...Your writing is great it is fantastic good work Bree that must of been a tough thing to do wow.<br />The wet and muddy stuff you said that would be really disgusting. :) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-22020333602644753762013-06-25T09:01:47.931+12:002013-06-25T09:01:47.931+12:00Awesome work Bree,
I like how you have written it ...Awesome work Bree,<br />I like how you have written it in present tense.<br />Great job.<br />Cool photos too. <br />I like how you said, I am in a cave it is wet and muddy so the mud is really squidgy.<br />Olivia:)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-72607279266523756682013-06-20T21:27:21.741+12:002013-06-20T21:27:21.741+12:00Your writing really meets the signs of success, Br...Your writing really meets the signs of success, Bree!<br /><br />You use your senses so well, have written in the present tense and it has strong verbs and other descriptive language. <br /><br />It is also neat to hear you read it so expressively!Mr Moriartyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14362859834913417326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3007857734233217082.post-28426527795530171622013-06-20T21:11:26.264+12:002013-06-20T21:11:26.264+12:00Hi Bree- amazing descriptive story- very sensory. ...Hi Bree- amazing descriptive story- very sensory. After reading your cool account of caving I could imagine being in the cave myself, smelling the stinky mud and wanting to be in a hot shower! Sounds like camp was awesome- Ka Mau te wehi!!!louise trenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00132493354835197616noreply@blogger.com